diumenge, 10 de maig del 2009

My English competence in 2009

http://mrcee91portfolio.blogspot.com/2009/03/sisterhood-of-traveling-pants.html the best written evidence
http://laiafont91p.blogspot.com/2008/11/oral-presentation_30.html: the best oral evidence

I believe that my best oral evidence it’s the oral presentation which I did with Laia about the different between XIX and actuality. This oral are the penultimate, maybe I did some mistakes, because one moment I don’t know what I want to said, but obviously who I’ve experience in oral presentation I can sort out the situation and I invent the words that I said (I didn’t read the paper I saw it and the words came to m) for me this is a great step, because in the others orals before this when I didn’t know what I said, I put nervous and I must to see the paper, in this oral I didn’t do this. For this I think that it’s one of my best oral presentations. A part in this the vocabulary is rich, and Laia and I used “difficult” words, we must to search some words in the dictionary, and nowadays I remember the majority. Maybe I improve my pronunciation, not a lot because I know that my pronunciation is so bad but well I can’t do anything in this moment for improve it.


On the other hand, my best written evidence are the one when I spoken about one film, a part that I love this film, I work in the text, I did a good summary because normally I only wrote 4 – 5 lines and not more, but in this I said all the important thinks that pas in the sisterhood of travelling pants. The vocabulary is worked and also the strucutre, if you compare this with the others summary this is the best. Maybe I can choose a composition but it we did without dictionary (at the first moment) I know that in the selectivitat we don’t have but well, for the moment it’s better do with it!

dissabte, 9 de maig del 2009

My English 2007 - 2009 [composition]

http://mrcee91portfolio.blogspot.com/2008/01/hello-im.html
If I see my first email, I look that it’s very simple. The structure it’s good but the phrases are very simple, are three or four words and a full stop or coma, This summer I went to Oxford 3 weeks, for learn english and basketball, this 3 weeks were fantastic! This is an example. Also I did some mistakes with the verbs, in all the text I wrote: STAY instead of BE. Maybe nowadays I put also a lot of time THAN, but I intent to correct it, but in my first email I put: I wait that, think that, I think that, and always I used to verbs like THINK, or LIKE, actuality I try to changed it, but I believe it’s impossible. In the past I never used connectors, and nowadays I write, not a lot, but more than before. For me this is a great step for my redactions, because without it the text was very drab and monotonous.

My English 2007 - 2009 [oral presentation]

http://batxilleratportfolios.blogspot.com/2007/11/mercs-summer.html: My summer in Oxford
http://laiafont91p.blogspot.com/2009/03/blog-post.html: London

It’s a coincidence but my first and my last oral presentation are base on England! In my presentation about my summer I remember that I was very nervous, I studied a lot the day before, my voice shacked and I didn’t want to start it, because was, not the first because in 4ht of ESO we did, but was the first without the paper, I’d all in my mind. I did big corporal movement, like my last, this is normal in me. A part in my first in one moment I was in “white”, I forgotten one word thanks to the teacher I said area, but I wanted to said entrance and not area, but doesn’t matter; this is a typical mistake that some people do.
In the last one, my fluency are better, because I didn’t memorize the text and thanks the photos I said the thinks, I only must to know the places and not more. The
I improve my pronunciation, not a lot because I know that my pronunciation is very bad and I can’t improve it unless I went to England or some English country alone. But now I listening my “Summer in Oxford” and I said some words in catalane accent like “religious” (in the minute 1:11) or “terrible” (1:15) and more examples like “two times London” (4:01). And a big mistake in one moment I said “bueno” a Spanish word!
My vocabulary isn’t rich, the words than, think, stay, well I repeated sometimes
In “London” I spoken fluency, I didn’t say a lot of times “aaammh” “aaahh” and this is good, for the understanding for the public. A part I believe it’s better do the oral with another because she can help you in the bad moments, when you are most nervous.

dilluns, 4 de maig del 2009

The day that a dream came true

Everybody have a dream and believes that it doesn’t come true, but maybe the 1% of the possibilities that this dream came true exists, and these will pas. I also have this kind of dream.
I dream about the day that my favourite basketball player five me and autograph. First of all I went to the match, and in the half of the match, thank the number of my place of the pavilion. I won an autograph of my idol. But always when I came to see him the clock ringsOne day my dream came true, I went to saw Barça – Madrid with my friends. All was perfect Barça won and in the half part the speaker said: “Please the number 208 comes here please” I did a scream, a strong happy scream, was my number! All the people looked me. I ran to the basket track and he asked who are my favourite player, I said Jº Carles Navarro, and in few minutes we were in the track speaking. I was nervous he spoke me, and said if I want to be a good player I only have to believe in me, and a port of this he gave me his autograph, and two kisses.This day was perfect, I was the invidious of all my friends, and my dream came true! Now I think that all came be true.

Think of a profession that is dying our. Write a dialogue

One day two farmers, on for 60 years and the other of 35 years speak about his profession

  • Jon: Hello Mr. James, I know that you are on of the old farmer of this town. I’d a farm also
  • Mr James: Hi, well this is true; my sons wouldn’t be a farmer because they said that this profession hasn’t got future.
  • Jon: But I believe that the technology changed a lot, right not?
  • Mr. James: Yes, yes, if you compare the machines for put an example, in the 70s century I worked with animals, we lived in an old house next to the farm...
  • Jon: Well my family used to work in a big farm but now the times changed and my family hasn’t got it, but before the crisis we lived in a country house next to the farm and with the animals pasture there.
  • Mr. James: Jon you didn’t understand me, I want said that before everybody, without exception lived in the country house, and they produced his food, and worked with vegetables and animals. Actually the framers can live in the town and thanks the new machines can know what happens in their propriety.
  • Jon: Ah, OK sorry, I confuse the words that you said!
  • Mr James: Don’t worry, Well Jon I must to go with my animals. So long
  • Jon: Ok, bye bye Mr James See you.